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We are posting our novel in bite-size chunks on YouTube. (Description below) We would love your feedback. (We wouldn't be mad if you like and subscribe as well) https://youtu.be/YWyR-QiyrNk Powerful twin sisters are forced onto opposing sides of a deadlocked secret war that has spanned generations. When superhuman abilities, slippery tactics and clandestine squads of mercenaries can't keep the world from disaster For a being destined to save the world, this is A Time To Be Born