A question for musicians

Oceanside CA

Description

Hi: I am posting this in the musicians community. I'm not looking to form a band or whatnot. I just would like positive feedback and honest criticism of a track that I worked on. I'm really proud of it, but that's mostly because I know the effort I put into it and I can hear things, nuances, that might just be ignored or buried in the track. If you like it please click thumbs up. If you have suggestions that aren't mean spirited please leave a comment. I'm confident in my abilities as a musician and have played for decades so I don't want to lie to myself and say things are better than what they really are. Thank you for reading. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wz4nWVMZCtE&list=PLnxJ39VYnzEh61JOnwnKUqGj2hiLitH7g&index=5