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I gave your song a listen.
Production isn’t bad. Mixing is a bit harsh but no worries, that could always be reworked. Vocals are ok. The song itself obviously borrows but from others but not so bad it doesn’t sound original but seriously… really… a girl in underwear dancing during s song saying it’s alright to cry?
That is basically the most misfit thing you could have done for a video or that song. The butterflies were cool and she’s hot, but the story doesn’t fit. I kind of get it, she is really cute and probably your girlfriend (or you want her to be) but do things for the art, not the clickbait and you’ll catch a lot more people. Obviously you can make a good product. It just has to make sense. It totally threw me off.
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