Original song feedback

Johnston RI

Description

Hobbyist just looking for some original song feedback. Is it very obvious it was done by an amateur? What are the things you would change (fix??) If you were sitting at the beach with a drink could you chill to this? Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/5kVAiPtWCCsKXr02aVvwdR?si=WEXYyBo7Sh-5mspnkmSlGg Apple https://music.apple.com/us/album/sunshine-on-my-mind-single/1557587303